A Fool To Long Poem by Walter C. Edwards

A Fool To Long



Who is the fool in this game,
of betrayal gilt and shame,
we will dance no more,
to our private little score,
dark days will seem like years,
full of wine and a lonely heart,
that is just the start of tears,
don't ask me why,
only remember who did me wrong,
for so long, I am no longer a fool for you,
so remember you just did it all wrong,
just did it way to long.

Saturday, February 23, 2013
Topic(s) of this poem: lost love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Hardik Vaidya 23 February 2013

Walter C Edward nice poem, I liked it, but I felt it incomplete somewhere, I am yet to come across an experience in life which is so black and white, unfortunately I have always found mines to be in the grey. Thanks for sharing.

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