A Gentle Reminder Poem by Ravi Panamanna

A Gentle Reminder



Life is an eternal flow,
It is often a catching glow.
Life is often a passing show,
Here, we are friends and foe.

Life is a stream,
Life is a monochrome.
Sometimes, it is a haunting scream,
Sometimes, it is a silken dream.

Many taverns we live in,
Many dales we go by.
Moments form an endless chain,
Moments leave in us singular sighs.

Life prompts many clues
We, but fail to grab those cues.
In the end, it is all an emotional heap,
Dales are lost and we simply weep.
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26/04/2013

POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Life is a war chiefly between our emotions and intelligence and in the end, we are lost to our emotional volcanoes.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Tapan Kumar Pradhan 26 April 2013

your ideas are good. But your rhyming is forced. A poem need not rhyme at all to be a good poem. Rhyme shhould come naturally.....! !

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Ravi Panamanna

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Ottapalam- Kerala State- India
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