A Gift... Poem by indira babbellapati

A Gift...

Rating: 4.8


whoever said
tears spell a woman weak?

it's her way to gain
more strength
emptying out
the unwanted stuff
don't we batheto feel relaxed?

yes, i do have tears abundant
yes, i do have laughter in loads
yes, spirituality springs from me
as from anyone else
i'm softpowerful and practical

yes, in pride i say
i'm a gift and it's not my bother
if you fail to recognize my worth!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Swetha Vanakayalapati 14 June 2012

yes......if we feel relaxed once we cry and it never bothers.....we become pure.... Hats off to you mam! !

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Veeraiyah Subbulakshmi 14 June 2012

I agree with your bold declaration! ! my gift to you is 10 marks! !

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Pankajam K 14 June 2012

Fantastic poem. I do agree. You are hundred percent right.

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Anita Sehgal 14 June 2012

U have given a new dimension to a women's tears. Men beware! well written.

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Neela Nath Das 14 June 2012

Very nice.Tear is not our weak point but strength.Thanks for sharing!

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Wabi Sabi 18 June 2012

I see your point! if there is someone who tells you what women tear would be like next time, answer like this. you are as feminine as I am. it is okay, you can cry I hate people who tend to solve any mystery for gender stuff. crying is just a part of human beings.

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Ashley Dowdy 16 June 2012

Just wanted to say this poem is a gift and ty for sharing. All woman should be inspired by this. Sometimes I forget my self worth and reading is just a reminder. No matter what struggles woman go through, no matter what people may say....as long as woman know their own self worth... I believe woman would be a lot happier in life. Everyone should know their self worth and not listen anyone else.....thats my option anyways =) wonderful, wonderful poem.

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Marieta Maglas 15 June 2012

great poem about a gifted woman-thank you for sharing

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Valerie Dohren 15 June 2012

Self-worth is so important and women are often lacking in this. Good write.

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Captain Cur 15 June 2012

Tears of sadness, tears of joy, loss, remembrance. They help wash the soul. Good poem and strong write,

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indira babbellapati

indira babbellapati

visakhapatnam, india
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