A Girl Like Me Poem by ESPN CHICK

A Girl Like Me

Rating: 4.9


I wonder why I can't die
Cause I'm filled with pain
Broken all over the place

And I'm still here in this flesh
Still moving when I should be six feet under

I tried hard to die but I'm still here
Knowing no one will miss me
Even though I wish he would miss me

Cause he meant everything to me
I wish he knew the way I felt

But he never will
Not till the day I die
Even though I have tried to tell him

I don't think he would ever love a girl like me
A girl who wishes she was dead

A girl who is broken inside and out
He would never love a girl like me
Therefore he can never know how I feel till the end of my time

January 6,2008


Not good i know but who cares

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Anjali Mandokhot 07 January 2008

so expressive of the real feelings of yearning....tnx 4 sharing

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A very moving poem, it's hard to believe in love when you feel like jagged glass inside.

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Gregory Collins 22 May 2008

if you know how much you wanted to die, you would not be broken all over the place, , so, before you get sad, read frank stanford, then rethink all your poems, cause they just aint sad. maybe that is what is dragging into the open fire, because you must beware of the passenger, you must DO DAMAGE TO the BRAIN WHILE RAISING A FLOWER OF FIRE, nice try except to the fact there is something wrong, but i am not bob dyland, just a funkey uselss american

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Barbara Terry 03 June 2008

I like the last line, and when I started to post my poems, everyone tried to tell me that it was written wrong. Poetry today tells about our lives, and what we are going, or have gone through. This is a very well written piece and says so much about why others don't listen when we talk. Thank you for sharing, but I believe that there is someone out there for a girl like you. Love & hugs, Barbara

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Egi David Perdana 20 September 2008

a girl like you is you mother or you sister

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Jerry Hughes 17 May 2010

......self-indulgent, badly written rubbish!

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Ken E Hall 03 August 2009

A sad poem from one so young with unrequited love a very good subject you can feel....when Mr Right comes get ready with the magic carpet....... regards

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Alan Curtis 03 May 2009

A grl like u is one of a kind, there will always b someone that actualy does care for u. Keep on keep'n on home grl, Hippy Sav

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Greenwolfe 1962 01 April 2009

Now don't say that. I thought your structure was just fine. Structure makes a poem easy to read. That's what your poem was. I enjoyed reading it so much that I actually wanted to read more. Your message was clear and sincere. I could feel the heartbreak. Just a wonderful writing. GW62

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young lady. some lucky fella woudl be just lucky to have you as his bride.

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