A Harder Fall Poem by Sad Truth

A Harder Fall

Rating: 2.5


An early summer...
Do you remember?
All that we did? !
All the places we hid? !

I'd skip a stone...
You'd pull me near...
And whisper sweet words...
In my ear...!

Every breath that you'd take...
I knew my heart would break...
Harderer we would and did fall...
When we no longer had it all...!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Charmaine Sinclair 28 November 2008

a short poem filled with gestures, descrptions that give a strong impact. i like the tang of bitter sweet there.

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