A Hillbilly Boy Named Santa (Limerick -1) Poem by Harindhar Reddy

A Hillbilly Boy Named Santa (Limerick -1)

Rating: 4.5


(Edited version of my First Limerick)

Yippee! Passion made Santa Singh silly,
he glanced at a nubile young filly
from Longtown in England -
his heart danced in dreamland -
But he didn't say a word to his Lilly.

Harindhar Reddy appreciates your read and suggesting.........
(It's 50th attempt. Ur advice or version is welcome - Thank U)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vipins Puthooran 05 August 2012

'Tis a very beautiful Limerick! ! ! ! Really good rhyme words! ! ! Top marksss! ! !

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Harindhar Reddy 19 May 2020

Thank you for the beautiful comment on the poem 🙏🙏

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Unwritten Soul 05 August 2012

This poem has your old sound, which is your trademark, but i am so wonder why suddenly you change the way you write, anyway they all good...write more new stuff_Unwritten Soul

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Harindhar Reddy 19 May 2020

I'm grateful for your gracious review on the poem 🙏🙏 🙏

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