A Knight Last Quest Poem by Randy Hogan

Randy Hogan

Randy Hogan

pænˈ dʒ iː ə Mountain Range

A Knight Last Quest

Rating: 5.0


A knight battles with his last breath,
he cries out in the darkness of night,
Bleeding heart flows undying devotion
for his princess eternally love!

After so many battles he dies
from the sharpest of all spears,
soft weapon of sublime beauty
and its QUEST FOR TRUE LOVE.
xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxxooxoxoxoxxoxxoxoxooxxooxxoxoxoxooxxo.

some battles we fight we just can't win!
For the armor over his heart couldn't protect!
she went straight for his weakness, the window
to his soul, his eyes,
she pierced HIM in the heart of his soul!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Vaibhav Pandey 10 February 2009

a excellent write sir......great impact....one of your better ones....10 for sure.

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Catrina Heart 06 February 2009

such a classic theme...great composition indeed....with fine rhymes..10

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Rinzu Susan Rajan 06 February 2009

wow...great concept...but a spelling mistake in dies...u wrote it as dyes... do correct it...

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Sarah Abdullah 03 February 2009

Soo beautiful... Love the last lines... Such Great lines... Simply love it

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Anjali Sinha 02 February 2009

wow a beautiful poem Randy 'she went straight for his weakness, the window to his soul, his eyes, she pierced him in the heart of his soul' ahaaaaaa the power of your pen A++ anjali

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