A knight battles with his last breath,
he cries out in the darkness of night,
Bleeding heart flows undying devotion
for his princess eternally love!
After so many battles he dies
from the sharpest of all spears,
soft weapon of sublime beauty
and its QUEST FOR TRUE LOVE.
xoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxoxxooxoxoxoxxoxxoxoxooxxooxxoxoxoxooxxo.
some battles we fight we just can't win!
For the armor over his heart couldn't protect!
she went straight for his weakness, the window
to his soul, his eyes,
she pierced HIM in the heart of his soul!
such a classic theme...great composition indeed....with fine rhymes..10
wow...great concept...but a spelling mistake in dies...u wrote it as dyes... do correct it...
Soo beautiful... Love the last lines... Such Great lines... Simply love it
wow a beautiful poem Randy 'she went straight for his weakness, the window to his soul, his eyes, she pierced him in the heart of his soul' ahaaaaaa the power of your pen A++ anjali
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
a excellent write sir......great impact....one of your better ones....10 for sure.