when the moon is full
I die a little more inside
for my love
so if you look into the night sky
and see, the moon is full
just know I am on the other side
of the World looking back at you
and dying a little more inside
Know this feeling far too well, and all I know is, it's hurts far too much to live with for long. We have to compromise and look to other skies Randy... A fine read, highly romantic in the most pain filled way. Smiling at you, wishing on a comet Tai
You have written this in a simple yet really stylish way. In such a few words it says so very much. The moon representing emotions is so very deep and this poem drew me right in. 10 love Karin
i have to go back here, my friend to click this to my faves thanks again for sharing Maia
wow..so sweet.. captivating thoughts...so impressive so touching..... full of love and longing... what a beautiful night...a very beautiful moon replica of your love thanks for sharing, my friend this is so romantic...beautiful picture of a wonderful night 10++++ Lovelots, maia
just know I am on the other side of the World looking back at you you touchhhhhhhhhhed me -10 anjali
a touching poem, sadly said and heartfuly read
written with beautiful words..words that will live permanently here in my heart. I just love these lines of yours. so if you look into the night sky and see, the moon is full just know I am on the other side of the World looking back at you and dying a little more inside Now i know..i will be looking into the night sky and if the moon is full, i know, that you are on the other side looking back at me..Promise, i will, my friend. God bless you, Meggie
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Love letter from the moon - a wonderful piece Randy - and a very blessed person who receives such devotion.....10 + ++ for this verse of heartfelt longing..... from Fay....