Ruth Rayment

Rookie - 0 Points (19-01-88 / Greenwich)

A Letter.. - Poem by Ruth Rayment

I wrote you a letter
Stating everything
I told you what the world had done
While you battle under the scorching sun
I write gradually an slowly
With every word I wrote
I continually outspoken
So those that were round
Could hear my thoughts out loud
I know I might
Never expect another letter
So I write with
Pride, peace, and pleasure
Sending several other letters
I knew your time was through
When a letter arrived
The day struck noon
What a glorious way
To the end the day
You arrived through the door
Carrying a sack and more.

Comments about A Letter.. by Ruth Rayment

  • Rookie - 222 Points Adam Mckim (3/18/2012 7:27:00 PM)

    This was pretty good. I liked it. (Report) Reply

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  • Freshman - 569 Points Dr.subhendu Kar (6/26/2011 2:37:00 AM)

    yet ingenious write waking emotion to flow, quite evocative too of evoking poignancy, keep on posting,10++++, thanks for sharing (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,119 Points Tiku . (6/25/2011 10:28:00 AM)

    beautiful ink.full of love and emotion.loved it. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, August 8, 2010

Poem Edited: Monday, June 27, 2011

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