Young Church

Rookie - 151 Points (Lesotho, Maseru)

A Letter To My Wife - Poem by Young Church

You raise my temperature,
Honey.
Take me to a hot adventure,
Honey.
Unzip my chest gently
observe my heart beat rapidly
And let me watch yours smile at me.
you raise my temperature,
Honey.
I felt the heat writing this letter,
Honey.
Till death do us apart
Honey,
Let's keep this fire burning.

Your Loving Husband.

***The Book of Passion (Till death do us apart)


Comments about A Letter To My Wife by Young Church

  • Rookie - 348 Points Poetheart Morgan (9/20/2013 3:24:00 PM)

    You know the love is unique and need to be very careful with it! Love is for few persons in world. And you so young knows that. And others spend all life without knowing what love is. Blind, just wanting what they never will get.
    Because love recognizes its pair. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 17,714 Points Ramesh Rai (7/22/2013 5:14:00 AM)

    beautiful write. xlent. i liked it much. (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 923 Points Louis Rams (3/4/2012 10:11:00 AM)

    you have shown me your heart and i have shown you mine, and we will be together till the ends of time. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Olayemi Ayo (2/26/2012 1:48:00 PM)

    Your poem on the letter to my wife is well written, please keep it up. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Michael Williams (2/21/2012 7:58:00 AM)

    Well written, you showed your love and also the physichal romance was mentioned in a socialy acceptable way. I think you did well with this. I am right near 45 yrs old and this reminds me of a rime that T.V. would frown at a womans Clevage showing and all things shown on the tube were things a child could see and not be damaging to their spiritual groath. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 19 Points Niki Nicholas Nkuna (2/13/2012 12:52:00 PM)

    i love your telling that runs in the same line of love, keep telling and create more love (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 213 Points Siyabonga A Nxumalo (12/30/2011 5:47:00 AM)

    Brilliant poem Young C...i can tell you're realy inlove with your wife... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ethan Withey (11/22/2011 12:50:00 PM)

    The poet is very passionate to his wife and I love the till death do us part. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points The 4am Poet Worm (11/15/2011 1:54:00 PM)

    your own vows... im sure your honey knows how you feel... a commitment from the heart and feelings from your soul... nice write... please read... a song sung your way* (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points The 4am Poet Worm (11/15/2011 1:53:00 PM)

    your own vows... im sure your honey knows how you feel... a commitment from the heart and feelings from your soul... nice write... please read... a song sung your way* (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 3,910 Points Dave Walker (11/14/2011 11:21:00 AM)

    Like it theres nothing better than been in love.
    A great poem. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, November 13, 2011



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