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Rookie - 58 Points (Lesotho, Maseru)

A letter to my Wife


You raise my temperature,
Honey.
Take me to a hot adventure,
Honey.
Unzip my chest gently
observe my heart beat rapidly
And let me watch yours smile at me.
you raise my temperature,
Honey.
I felt the heat writing this letter,
Honey.
Till death do us apart
Honey,
Let's keep this fire burning.

Your Loving Husband.

***The Book of Passion (Till death do us apart)

Submitted: Sunday, November 13, 2011

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  • Rookie - 303 Points Poetheart Morgan (9/20/2013 3:24:00 PM)

    You know the love is unique and need to be very careful with it! Love is for few persons in world. And you so young knows that. And others spend all life without knowing what love is. Blind, just wanting what they never will get.
    Because love recognizes its pair. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 457 Points Louis Rams (3/4/2012 10:11:00 AM)

    you have shown me your heart and i have shown you mine, and we will be together till the ends of time. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Michael Williams (2/21/2012 7:58:00 AM)

    Well written, you showed your love and also the physichal romance was mentioned in a socialy acceptable way. I think you did well with this. I am right near 45 yrs old and this reminds me of a rime that T.V. would frown at a womans Clevage showing and all things shown on the tube were things a child could see and not be damaging to their spiritual groath. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie The 4am Poet Worm (11/15/2011 1:54:00 PM)

    your own vows... im sure your honey knows how you feel... a commitment from the heart and feelings from your soul... nice write... please read... a song sung your way* (Report) Reply

  • Rookie The 4am Poet Worm (11/15/2011 1:53:00 PM)

    your own vows... im sure your honey knows how you feel... a commitment from the heart and feelings from your soul... nice write... please read... a song sung your way* (Report) Reply

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