I Wish Poem by Young Church Poetry

I Wish

Rating: 4.8


I wish your heart is as
Creamy as your body,
Would not mind being
Addicted to your sweetness
I wish your heart is as
Hot as your long legs,
Would not mind wrapping
Your warmth around my heart
I wish your heart is as
Beautiful as you look,
Should not worry about it
Turning ugly in our holy union
I wish you are all
Before my loving sight.

***The Book Of Passion (Till death do us apart)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dave Walker 01 February 2012

Love is the best thing in the world. A great poem.

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Young Church Poetry 01 February 2012

Thank you Mr Walker, so excited about this one.

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Zibele Mrasi 02 February 2012

I wish I got a girl so I can ask her to read thi s I wish poem lol love it

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Ramesh Rai 02 February 2012

your love is grt, so u have posted a great poem. nice mention

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Pheko Motaung 02 February 2012

Fantastic! So many... delightful passages expressed economically and yet with great force.Morena'...ka.O kgeleke.Congratulations and keep inviting me to read your great masterpieces.

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Niki Nicholas Nkuna 13 February 2012

Beautiful poem indeed! Keep on telling us

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Wahab Abdul 09 February 2012

THE POEM IS VERY BEAUTIFUL. I LIKE THE POEM FOR THE QUALITY OF SIMPLICITY AND LUCIDITY.THE THEME OF THE POEM IS UNIVERSAL AND ORIGINAL, I LIKE THE POEM AND THE POEM DESERVES 10/10.

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Pheko Motaung 07 February 2012

Lerato le letle le bohlokwa.Lerato ke seikokotlelo la lefatshe.Ke motshepuwa wa lefatshe.Ha lerato le le siyo lefatshe le buswa ke mona, diqhwebeshano, ho se utlwane, merusu le manyofonyofo.O kgeleke ngwana monna.Tshwara jwalo Mosotho wa ka o tiise..

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Ace Of Black Hearts 02 February 2012

A lustful wish of love. Maybe it will be granted, maybe it will not. A poem in which a determination is sought. Somethings in this world just can't be bought. Tried and true through comes the thought. But still without an answer it is just a wish and only a wish. My prayers are with you in your search which has come due.

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Cosmic Dreamer 02 February 2012

Love is always a beautiful thing... Your poem is a beautiful vision of love... Well done... Very nice write...

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