A Letter To Son Poem by Ritika Deborah George
A Letter To Son
Keeping you for so long in my body
Feeling you taking a complete form of body
You were the best smile to wear
My hardest pain to bear
Watching you grow
Waiting for the fruits from seeds I sow
My hair became white
With the time and tide
Wishing if I was in my sweet home
I cry silently on this roadside roam
For plays I always stitched your cape
Today my cold body hardly has saree to drape
Crumbs of bread and sometimes tea
Cant relief me and leaves me thirsty
Heat and cold troubles me
Sons like you throw pebbles at me
When clouds pour heavily and sun shines bright
I run places finding shelter to hide
My trembling footsteps can't hold on for long
Soon I will be singing my death song
As I go on my last road
I leave my blessings to you and love load.
My trembling footsteps can't hold on for long Soon I will be singing my death song As I go on my last road I leave my blessings to you and love load.. ... very fine poem.
A strongly emotional poem on the unconditional love of a mother. Very well crafted it has smooth flow. Thanks for sharing.10++++
Its only the mother's love which can never be paid off from the world's zillions of money. She is an idol of love. Thank you sir for your appreciation
Hi Ritika, The unconditional love of a mother is expressed in a quite emotionally saturated manner.
thank you so much sir for appreciating me. I invite you to read my other poems too
When clouds pour heavily and sun shines bright I run places finding shelter to hide My trembling footsteps can't hold on for long Soon I will be singing my death song As I go on my last road I leave my blessings to you and love load. these last lines touched me very very much. your love and your struggle, you pain and your tears and now bidding farewell getting ready for the last journey....... such a wonderful poem. i am taken up by your writing. tony
Its a great compliment for me sir. Thank you so much sir for reading my poems always with great enthusiasm
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Touched by the feel of the poem....deeply thought and penned down. Keep it up...😊
I am so overwhelmed by encouraging words of yours