surya surya (dec -1948. / kozhikode, @chennai.india)

Your poem_a liberated woman is didactical, full of sense
and thought-proking.

Your very explosive poem is an eyeopener to such 'liberated' women who can guess the consequences of their actions..............thanks for sharing, mandara

a rhetorical question for the title. A very nice work on the essay of the modern woman.thanks for sharing.

waaw....
you have created a masterpiece sir...
and have covered almost all the dimensions..
10++++++++++
Regards:
prashant

its great you have left no stone unturned, dealt intelligently with the whole issue

great poem no words I gave a ten.

gave it a ten

I don't really agree to yr lines.. u can't just justify the liberation mostly in the way woman dress nowadays. Yes, some of women had unwritten agendas on their exposed body (through they minimalist-clothes) . But I also see many women try to catch the family & career both in her full devotion (with fully clothes) . And for me, to find the kid still linger in my side after crazy-work-hours is a special gift of God. Sorry that u didn't share the comfort idea of jeans (i even wear it at work) . Anyway... i like this great poem. i appreciate your view, tks for share.

i m so speechless...

This is a lovely poem and it is true. There is a few good things about a free woman though. A guy can show his passion to a girl easier without the family be wooed. The girl can hangout with the guy more cause the guy does some work. When they both share work they grab a hold of a close bond.