Delilah Miller (San Diego)

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A Lighter Shade

To all my conquests, past, present and future.


My coffee cup's a lighter shade of blue this morning.
Last night,
I transformed you into scalding dark coffee.
Now I can pour you into my cup,
any time, day or night.
Keeping my fingers on the cup ring;
I'll sense when to stir,
the amount of sugar you need,
when to take a sip
or let you cool off.

You melted in my voice, low and bright.
There's never a honest warning;
I'm a short, pudgy brunette, average
with great lips and a slight tan
to smooth over my thighs.
With a sparkle I keep in my eyes,
I'm charming, if not venomous,
to the man without morals.
Quietly, effectively, I show instead of tell.
You just didn't realize I've got the right words,
the achingly perfect images,
the best details
and the proper timing
for an unbelievable kiss.

Delilah Miller
Submitted: Monday, July 07, 2008
Edited: Friday, July 03, 2009


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  • Saadat Tahir (7/3/2009 1:32:00 PM)

    very inventive creative and fresh

    a new twist...of lemon in the storming tea cup...shall we

    great poetry
    cheers

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  • Lorena Walker (4/14/2009 5:53:00 PM)

    Love how you used coffee in this one...another great one!

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  • Howard Moore (7/10/2008 1:16:00 PM)

    A most impressing use of imagery, A true reading pleasure, Thank you for sharing

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  • David Desantis (7/8/2008 8:25:00 AM)

    this was effing excellent! I've never came across your stuff before...but im totally digging it...hahah your like a seductive tigress of some sort....i like the confidence, and i like the coffee analogy, especially the references to sugar...damn, very creative..10/10

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