A Like Or Dislike Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

A Like Or Dislike

Rating: 4.1


Did she like my saying so?
Have I not to show sincerity and go?
I have all my commitments to throw
She is there for me to show

I proposed for her hand
She was good and nice friend
She was nice all along the way
I had nothing more to offer or say

She might ask” Am I only friend”?
Does your world come to an end?
What feelings you intend to send?
Am forever for you on this earth and sand

You may not like me some times
Still offered you many times
You said yes to all proposals
It met with quick disposals

You were not simple female
You chose me as your partner or male
Is it not my turn to prove it right?
Without going into arguments or fight

What should I do to prove?
If you say no and disapprove
I shall try to be honest
To come in your life as true and best

What do I see and search in you?
Nice individual is in her and sentimentally true?
I know you may come all along
Either of us or any one may go wrong

She needed from me a personal security
I had all the things ready with ability
She was to enjoy life Time Company
I was there for her all the time to accompany

She was reluctant to commit in advance
She had repeatedly said it at more than once
I wanted it to heard it from her in words
The life was to move smoothly onward

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Maulin Shah 21 July 2010

I must stop dreaming In no way it is helping It gets me nowhere I must start from somewhere.. u mus judge it....10

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Chand Shikari 17 July 2010

Did she like my saying so? Have I not to show sincerity and go? I have all my commitments to throw.. she might have definitely liked your saying so....10

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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