Marilyn Lott

Freshman - 975 Points (5-28-42 / Washington state USA)

A Little Country Town - Poem by Marilyn Lott

It is a tiny little town in Oklahoma
Canute is the Indian name
Built out in the red dirt
Where lottery brought it to fame

Revivals were held in the early days
But now as you travel through
You’ll see old-fashioned windmills
The perfect picture for you

You will notice the storm shelters
Cotton Bolls out in the fields
Struggling to keep alive
This town is very small still

You’ll be able to spend the night
There’s a motel called Cotton Boll
Enjoy this town for a little while
You might take a little stroll

I think some of the best places
You can find while traveling around
If you take the time to notice
Are little country towns!

Comments about A Little Country Town by Marilyn Lott

  • Rookie Joseph S. Josephides (iosif S. Iosifidis) (9/20/2008 7:00:00 AM)

    Your picture is simple, lovely, visual with nostalgia and colors of life and innocence. Actually you save Innocence and this is a value added of the poem. I give you a 10, dear Marilyn Lott! ! (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 274 Points Kesav Easwaran (9/20/2008 2:11:00 AM)

    a good write...the last stanza lines tell a truth in poetic words...ten for this, Marilyn (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Alison Cassidy (9/20/2008 12:58:00 AM)

    What a pretty picture postcard poem. Charming. love, Allie ♥ ♥ ♥ ♥ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Stephanie Fiddy (9/17/2008 9:02:00 PM)

    Very nice! i expect this is your home town. What a nice way to show your love for it. Love it :) 10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points David Threadgold (9/10/2008 2:17:00 AM)

    Hi Marilyn. I feel as though I'm travelling down this road, great visual projection in your rhyming story. well done **10**. Regards Dave. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Thad Wilk (9/8/2008 6:33:00 PM)

    'Little' country towns, to visit - Sounds like fun!
    They always have a 'little' something there
    (of interest) - For everyone!
    Best wishes! *10*!
    Friend Thad (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 192 Points Joseph Poewhit (9/8/2008 9:26:00 AM)

    paints a pretty picture of quietness (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, September 8, 2008

Poem Edited: Monday, September 8, 2008

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