A Lost Chance Poem by Bellaina Bella Hernandez

A Lost Chance

Rating: 3.7


</>Why cant i tell you what i feel for you?
Am i that scared to know what you think of me?

Been hurt too many times
that made me give up on love
but this love i have for you
i know is a love thats true
might tell you real soon...
probably not tell you or anyone at all
not wanting to be persecuted
or to be judged
or to be told 'your not good enough'
not wanting to be rejected again
to hurt my heart further more

Now i look at you everday
as you look my way
i notice your new love affair
an overwhelming feeling of jealousy and hate
to all the girls around you but mainly her
i feel your intense stare upon me
a stare i know which is full of love
but i look away
and i finally relized
i allowed my feeeling to hurt me more
i lost my only chance
of someone i could love
could love me back
i lost a chance of life with love
i lost a chance of romance

11-3-2011

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Romeo Della Valle 03 November 2011

Outburst of your broken heart clearly leaving its traces behind! A very heart touching and well penned poem that evokes pain and suffering but also shows firmly your great desire to take a new path toward the horizon! Brava! 10+++ I can relate to this thought provoking write 100% and this can be seen in most of my poems including my most recent titled: A Love's Confession which I hope you can read whenever time permits! Obviously, young lady, Poetry runs in your blood! Keep inspiring the World with more of your amazing writes! God Bless You! Love and Peace for always! Romeo from NYC...

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Hope Anderson 14 December 2011

i really love this poem its great: +)

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Saucy Elmo 05 January 2012

This kind of reminded me of me and my most recent ex. Beautiful poem :)

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Jasbir Chatterjee 27 July 2012

Take heart, girl...there will be many more chances in future, all yours to grab...don't regret too much...that's the secret of life...

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Khushbeen Kaur 26 July 2013

The poem is a true reflection of feelings of many :)

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Anil Kumar Panda 26 July 2014

very nice.emotionally strong ink.liked it.

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Amitava Sur 26 July 2014

A touching poem with an expression of a broken heart.... very nice

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Lyn Paul 26 July 2013

Lovely words Bellaina. Being that there is no love and the truth is out is better for. This allows you to know this person is not the one. Yet know, there is some special person just waiting for you. Thank You

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Lyn Paul 26 July 2013

Lovely words Bellaina. Being that there is no love and the truth is out is better for. This allows you to know this person is not the one. Yet know, there is some special person just waiting for you. Thank You

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Khushbeen Kaur 26 July 2013

The poem is a true reflection of feelings of many :) ...Inspired me for my next poem

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