George BernardBloodyShaw

Rookie (One day at the beginning of my life / England is my country)

A Loud Cloud - Poem by George BernardBloodyShaw

The serenity of my sky
As it passes me by.
Gently flowing
And glowing
Its whites
And at eventide -
Its pinks,
Sometimes red
Methinks
As that sky
Passes by.

The aloud
Comes a cloud.
No serenity.
Just calamity
In my sky.

A storm
Is born
In my quiet life
That WAS banality.
Batten that hatch
And watch
Till that LOUD cloud
Passes me by.


Comments about A Loud Cloud by George BernardBloodyShaw

  • Rookie Tsira Goge (11/17/2008 1:06:00 PM)

    George, Your verses hold in themselves deep emotion.... It was pleasant to me these poetic ways:
    ........................................
    The serenity of my sky
    ..........................................
    Till that LOUD cloud
    Passes me by.
    ..........................................
    Best wishes,
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  • Rookie - 104 Points To Windward (11/17/2008 12:34:00 PM)

    Nicely navigated shipmate (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kris Smith (11/17/2008 12:24:00 PM)

    George a gem it was nice to see you in Stratford 10 Chris (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, November 17, 2008

Poem Edited: Saturday, January 17, 2009


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