Treasure Island

Ambrosia Ambrosia

A Love Affair With Moon!

Oh, that gorgeous, smiley crescent
Again surfaced in the gloomy, empty sky
Eyes gaze untiringly, as if discovered just now
Newness explored in my mundane life.

Though departs for a couple of days
But never forgets to roll up again
A great come back to fill that hollow sky as
Even millions of stars fall flat to add that charm.

Spring added to my twin steps once more
Spice sprayed generously on to my lonely nights
Stars twinkle brightly and hopefully in my dreams
What a solace I find every night in moonlight!

Oh, my dearest, nearest (/farthest?) ,
Make a promise not to leave me alone,
Never ever forget to make a come back!
Coz’ you are my sole and soul mate!

I can’t stop romancing with you,
So I never wish to go on moon,
Coz' then I can't see him, will I survive?
Your sight makes me feel like
On the earth, as in the heaven!

Submitted: Monday, May 13, 2013
Edited: Wednesday, May 15, 2013

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I can't stop dreaming about the romance with moon!

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  • Frank (popeye) Pulver (11/25/2013 1:08:00 AM)

    Too me the moonless night is the darkness of the heart, and moon light is the light of the heart.
    It is your dream that will always be you to the heart of your heart. The love affair with love (Report) Reply

  • Ramesh Rai (5/15/2013 5:19:00 AM)

    4th stanza - Óh, my dearest........not to leave me alone. fabulous. you are my soul and soul mate. amazing imagination. must never stop romancing coz this is life and so to survive. xlent. (Report) Reply

  • Pranab K Chakraborty (5/14/2013 12:41:00 AM)

    ...I never wish to go on moon,
    Coz' then I can't see him, will I survive? .....

    Good it feels to hear but much hard to bear by a lover who loves madly his/her beloved.... They would get shock perhaps by getting such doctrine........ The moon-poem otherwise written well. (Report) Reply

  • Ace Of Black Hearts (5/14/2013 12:34:00 AM)

    If it could be captured, if it could be forever held, what would happen to all others who look upon the moons gazing light? Forever to be followed by a darkness. A castle created just for her. A body of such delight, such might, how could one be held down so tight. Would it be wrong? Would it be selfish to leave the stars wanting? An empty void in each of there hearts, Do they dim? No longer so bright, a faded twinkle. What would it do the skies as we know them. Loved Your Poem, Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

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