A Magic Figure Of 800 Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

A Magic Figure Of 800

Rating: 3.9


What magic figure to multiply and add?
It enhances spirit and getting me so much mad
I feel like to act as like and display with innocence
It has brought me so much joy in poem’s presence

How child does feel happiness when gifted with toy?
You can clearly see on his face happiness and joy
It will be less apparent when he develops as grown up boy
The emerging poet may get same joy when others enjoy

I wanted to celebrate it with fire crackers and lights
It had shown me right way with vision and site
It may not be large contribution to the cause
It gave me enough room to think seriously with pause

I shall be considered as small fly in fray
Some one may come and simply flay
I have to accept at in good gesture
They are my asset and bright future

It is always good to accept criticism
It develops inner strength to act with wisdom
We have act as ear and mind of the people
Pure imagination may not help but land you in trouble

I was slowly advancing with caution
Every theme was considered and added with precaution
Freedom of speech and expression doesn’t mean unrest
It has to stand and wither the storm with endurance test

It may not go well with some of the section
You may invite wrath and reactive action
Sometimes passion may be inflamed to cause havoc
Steps might prove difficult even if taken as adhoc

I have to learn a lot from present environment
Good test must be developed to draw nice comments
It strengthens the belief in very nice creation
It is of course very powerful tool for the recreation

I don’t expect over night change
I will have to adjust and properly manage
It is public demand and that has to be counted
There is nothing like loss or gain which has to be amounted


There may be thousand of creations which may speak well
They might have different colors with imagination to tell
I may have my special presentation that may not go smooth
It is still worth try to stand in race and prove its worth

I shall be celebrating my wonderful creation with no much zeal
I have sense of humor and joy which may not be able to conceal
It speaks of great efforts on the part of individual poet
It is passing off an event which may go on unnoticed and quiet

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kunwar Patel 02 October 2010

I feel like to act as like and display with innocence It has brought me so much joy in poem’s presence

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Chand Shikari 12 July 2010

What magic figure to multiply and add? It enhances spirit and getting me so much mad.. indeed achievment....10

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How child does feel happiness when gifted with toy? You can clearly see on his face happiness and joy It will be less apparent when he develops as grown up boy.. it ismsteady development....10

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Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal

Vadali, Dist: - sabarkantha, Gujarat, India
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