A Meaningless Poem Poem by Naseer Ahmed Nasir

A Meaningless Poem

Rating: 4.8


Sounds
When they follow you like dogs
In the forest of silence,
Itch-afflicted, skeletal loneliness
When it litters
Offspring of dreams
In shallow ponds of evenings;
The crows perched
On branches of the sun
Then fly away.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Fowler 29 October 2008

Your last lines are especially memorable. Brief, but far from meaningless. A pleasure to read you once again. Best regards, Sandra

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Kite Remedy 14 November 2008

i find that you 'meaningless poem' is quite meaningful. fine piece..

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Naidz Ladia 29 December 2008

the only meaningless is the title but the contents are full of meaning..ths s good..

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Miriam Maia Padua 19 January 2009

the MEANINGLESS POEMS with full of meaning... brilliant write....10++

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Riquetta Elliott 20 February 2009

The title sounds ok but your poem were great.

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Yelena M. 27 August 2009

For me, this poem is the worded reflection of the moment when a dream is broken and seems there is no hope left.When one looks at the world and there is no meaning in reality and one feels an emptiness inside, a vacuum in heart and soul, a silence is all around even when voices speak..You expressed it just as it is..right from those shallow ponds of evenings trying to capture that offspring of a Dream.Thanks for sharing your poetry with us, Naseer. Yelena M.

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Sonya Florentino 24 August 2009

Ay, this meaningless poem seems will follow you like dogs through forests of silence...!

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Duh Huh 05 July 2009

A meaningless poem full of wisdom has so much meaning. Thank you for sharing your talent with another great poem Naseer :)

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Chatara Conway 23 April 2009

Sometimes meaningless means everything! Perfect!

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Vaibhav Pandey 13 March 2009

you took all the liberty iin writing this one.....so you called this one meaningless...the things that comes straight from heart can never be meaningless like this one...brilliant...10

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