Dan Brown

Rookie - 62 Points (20.02.1988 / Newcastle-Upon-Tyne, UK)

A Message - Poem by Dan Brown

This is a message to say
I still cry every day.
I think of you,
What we went through.
I’m glad I couldn’t stay.

If you play with fire, you will get burnt.
You played with fire, I hope you’ve learnt.

This is a message to tell you
That I am hurting too.
I’m barely sane,
I feel the pain.
But I’m still getting through.

If you play with fire, you will get burnt.
You played with fire, I hope you’ve learnt.

This is a message to say
I’m finally out your way.
You didn’t want me
We could never agree.
But now, you see, you pay.

This is my message, please don’t cry,
This is my message saying goodbye.


Comments about A Message by Dan Brown

  • Rookie - 0 Points Mohammad Al-kurdi (6/28/2009 1:58:00 PM)

    for me, i see a cause-and-result message which everyone has to learn...... good work Mr. Brown (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Mary Ali (5/16/2007 4:54:00 AM)

    Hi Dan, It's so beautiful. I feel that I can almost taste the pain. It's so deep and moving, a wonderful piece of poetry. Well done.
    Mary (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Amanda Figure (1/4/2007 6:19:00 PM)

    i luv this poem its like i can feel the pian in this poem
    its really good (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Tamsin Burnett (2/21/2006 9:24:00 AM)

    how come your poems seem to be written about my feelings? ? i've never read a poem that sums them up so well. its so beautiful.xxx (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Bridgid Patrick (2/16/2006 12:25:00 PM)

    Hi dan, i like this one.. brings back certain memories......x (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Missy Trinity Ferrari. (2/8/2006 10:45:00 AM)

    omg dan this is a truly great poem are these the type of poems you were talking about i love it
    Melissa (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, January 10, 2006

Poem Edited: Monday, February 28, 2011


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