A Mind Song Poem by ritty patnaik

A Mind Song

Rating: 5.0


in your being there
every thing seems perfect
the days glides by,
like the dreams
we thought of
., a strange boat floating,
in the river of the sky.

some how,
the days fly away
like little birds,
in there wings.
flying in endless sky
which embraces them,
in its vast expanse of
azureness.

when you are
close to me
all wishes fulfilled
what i get,
and not get
i have no track of that.,
a bird of hope flys
with stretched wings
in the sky
, in a distance,
making me
secure and happy.

when you are not there,
life becomes topsy turvy,
like a thunderstorm,
in a dark night
in the deep sea.
i feel my little boat
would get swallowed,
in the whirlwinds of waves
and get sucked,
into its hungry deep centre
into the abyss of
deep darkened water.

in your absense
the sky so big
keeps quiet
when you say a word
even the dark cloud
hides its face
in the dark
expanse of the sky.

when you come back
my feet,
dont touch the ground,
my eyes, look far,
far away,
like a river full
, lapping its water
on the banks of dreams.

love touches,
again and again
like the rain of monsoon
falls in the dreamy sky.

you love to drizzle
in my minds song
still they cannot express
my minds desire,
to say
how very much
i love you!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jean Dament 31 December 2009

A sweet & heartfelt expression of love shows in this lovel poem of yours. Thanks for sharing. 'in there wings'-should be 'in their wings' 'expance'-should be 'expanse' ok Spiritsong

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Nalini Hebbar 12 October 2009

a very sweet love song...a long marriage can do this to a couple...can't stay a moment without the other...loved it

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Sarvesh Kulkarni 14 September 2009

simple and beautiful poem, ma'am. expressive and emotional diction. wonderful. thank you.

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Ejaz Khan 05 September 2009

A brautiful write, Ritty! ! ! ! !

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