A Modern Paradise! Poem by Ramesh T A

A Modern Paradise!

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Rotating sprinkler spraying water over green lawns,
Colourful flowers fully bloomed dancing by breeze,
The buildings standing in sophisticated models, I feel
As if I am stranded in paradise with none besides me!

A calm atmosphere prevails there except the sound of
Humming birds and bees hovering over flowers to get
Honey and enjoy varieties of feast leaving me as witness
Just like them among the dancing flowers under sunshine!

This is modern paradise one has to be ever living, I feel,
When I am coming out of a modern hospital office and
Planning to go to town by available vehicle outside.....
After seeing the new born child fresh as new little flower!

Sans natural surrounding, it will be a concrete jungle
To stay inside modern buildings fully closed for AC...!

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Dillip K Swain 14 March 2022

Sans natural surrounding, it will be a concrete jungle....true dear poet.

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Jaishree Nair 29 August 2015

We can only enjoy artificially created Paradise. Thought well penned .thanks for sharing

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Kumarmani Mahakul 29 August 2015

Wonderful imagery. So nicely depicted. Thanks for sharing.

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Ramesh T A 29 August 2015

Thanks for you nice appreciation of the poem, my friend!

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M Asim Nehal 28 August 2015

Very well written, i liked it.............10 If you find time please review my poems. Thanks.

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Ramesh T A 29 August 2015

Thank you for your good comment and I do what you say when I get time!

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Ramesh T A

Ramesh T A

Madurai, Tamil Nadu, India
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