Ramesh T A

Freshman - 831 Points (28th August 1950 / Madurai, Tamil Nadu, India)

A Beacon Of Love! - Poem by Ramesh T A

Lonely as a cloud I was walking on the beach;
Pain of love lost I was trying to forget in Nature.

Reclined I on a sand meadow musing over Moon.
Moon light beam was falling on the dancing waves
As light house beacon from the horizon to the shore
Enlightening and guiding the sea faring boats there!

A 173 year old defunct light house is still standing
As a memorial to the tourists coming to the beach!
The past love too as the light house beacon remains
In the mind forever to revive the glory of past times!

Love bloomed as green plant but remains as blue Sky;
But the past memory of love ever gives joy in dreams!
Everyone’s life has a meaning for all to learn afterwards;
But memory of love lives in the world till the end of time!


Comments about A Beacon Of Love! by Ramesh T A

  • Silver Star - 3,508 Points Walterrean Salley (11/10/2009 6:03:00 PM)

    Love is natural, And, in this poem, I love the way you have shown the related similarities between love and nature itself. Beautifully done. 10 (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 0 Points Stacey Watts (10/20/2009 10:09:00 AM)

    Very beautiful here. You create an imagery of loss of a love. It was like watching a master painter. You captured this wonderfully. Excellent job. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 44,221 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (10/4/2009 7:43:00 PM)

    Reclined I on a sand meadow musing over Moon.
    Moon light beam was falling on the dancing waves
    As light house beacon from the horizon to the shore
    Enlightening and guiding the sea faring boats there.....lovely and powerful becan to convery the love message....very good piece...10

    rad mine dilemma...step in stone...close the eyes (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Bob Blackwell (7/30/2009 12:25:00 PM)

    Ramesh, this is a beautiful poem about noticing things and nature. Bob 10+ (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Bhaswat Chakraborty (7/29/2009 6:05:00 AM)

    'Love bloomed as green plant but remains as blue Sky'

    what a powerful expression of a universal reality! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Catrina Heart (7/25/2009 3:05:00 AM)

    Love bloomed as green plant but remains as blue Sky;
    But the past memory of love ever gives joy in dreams!
    Everyone’s life has a meaning for all to learn afterwards;
    But memory of love lives in the world till the end of time!
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    Another love painted in poignancy...well said...10/10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Samanyan Lakshminarayanan (7/25/2009 2:27:00 AM)

    very true sir...a painful joy it is......very nicely depicted (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Saturday, July 25, 2009

Poem Edited: Thursday, July 30, 2009


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