Musfiq us shaleheen

Rookie - 851 Points (31st, December,1970 / Khulna, Bangladesh)

A Moment


A moment indulged rough-and-tumble,
A new frustration bloomed
As a kite cut off when swing on air
Sandbars cut in the velocity of river

She went to honey moon,
My speed less time ceased and stuck
moving from fire to cold
At the end, spring moreover fade-out

Dream lies under digester,
You will not come back again
Shadow clouds strikes on dark clouds,
Dream blended as ice to rain drops

Cats and dogs rain flooded,
over river flood plain
Clouds are spreading with,
firing through the sky, again and again-

- Shaleheen, February 20,2013

Submitted: Tuesday, February 19, 2013
Edited: Friday, June 13, 2014

Topic of this poem: Sad


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A Moment

Comments about this poem (A Moment by Musfiq us shaleheen )

  • Rookie Sudip Chandra (11/20/2013 2:00:00 PM)

    Nicely represent the moment. very lovely write. well imagery. i liked the perception. (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,074 Points Hazel Durham (3/11/2013 10:24:00 AM)

    Raptures of loss of a loved one so vibrant with great imagery! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Madina Morris (3/7/2013 4:56:00 PM)

    (Hand clapping) its just something about this poem i love, or maybe its how you set up the words to have a deeper meaning...i don't know what it is but please, never stop writing: D (Report) Reply

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