Lisa Rhodes

Rookie - 71 Points (Born 1962 / Manhattan, New York City)

A Morning In Paradise - Poem by Lisa Rhodes

In the scissor star cut
morning, the sleeping ocean
gently awakens from brilliant
appollion sun rays;
it boils into ripples-
then the sun dives into a bottomless
royal blue pool, running
in competition with the silver slippery fishes
pulled by a metallic thin light,
swimming in and out
like the luminous lining of sexy new dress.

Comments about A Morning In Paradise by Lisa Rhodes

  • Gold Star - 10,112 Points Heather Wilkins (12/9/2013 4:19:00 PM)

    well written piece of poetry enjoyed your descriptive words (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie Oluko George (2/17/2009 12:59:00 AM)

    so sweet a poem....we all picturise the scene...big up! (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,022 Points Indira Renganathan (2/17/2009 12:17:00 AM)

    Well done...'royal blue pool, the luminous lining of sexy new dress.'beautiful description..congrats10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, February 16, 2009

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