Kaila George

Rookie - 740 Points (20 October 1962 / New Zealand)

A Mothers Bliss - Poem by Kaila George

The most amazing thing
I have ever seen

Was the sight of my boy?
For the very first time

Those little hands
And tiny feet

With soft brown eyes
That melted my heart

His skin was soft
His smile so sweet

It made smile
To at last know my life's
Worth while

I was to scared to hold him close
To afraid Id break him some how

But when I finally did
It was a mother's bliss

The joy he brought me
Was beyond anything I'd known

To hold him close
Was a dream come true?

And that one singular moment
Now lives on in my heart


Poet's Notes about The Poem

Sheesshh getting all clucky now...(smiles)

Comments about A Mothers Bliss by Kaila George

  • Bronze Star - 2,769 Points Kevin Patrick (8/4/2012 12:25:00 AM)

    Wonderful job, your son is privliged to have you as his mother, I know for all the world of my mothers love, she could not write something as good as you could.

    God Bless (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 20 Points Mark Normand (7/31/2012 11:11:00 AM)

    A very nice poem. It is well written and it give insight into the way my mother feels for me.Good job. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 49,150 Points Frank James Ryan Jr...fjr (7/24/2012 11:06:00 PM)

    A ' blissful' couple of couplets here, as I wind down the night(could not get a wink o' sleep last night...don't know why...but i'm crashin' hard and fast right now, and must hit the down feathers so I may return to your pages 2-morra! Enjoyed this...and Thank You for your lengthy visit to my work this evening...I appreciate it big-time, young lady! ~FjR~! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, July 24, 2012

Poem Edited: Wednesday, July 25, 2012


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