with just a 24 hour day
with a flower blossoming every day
with a cloud changing its face every single day
we the tiny people.....don't
look at it that way.
we think of it as just the next day..
we plan it from the previous day
we just think it is 'ANOTHER DAY'
where as it is a 'NEW DAY'
Reading through it seems that you were just going around the bush of a new day, but making it in capital letters it expressed connotations of word...looking the bright side of life to make things right, planned ahead and a step of today for a brighter tomorrow..10
I agree wholeheartedly, we never seem to see things the way we should, do we? a beautiful piece. Thanks.
Just another day, but have to look forward to enjoy it to the fullest. this is nice, poetry at its best.
each day be new to start and old atlast..wht really matters is the deeds not the days n hrz.. loved the poem...
A very nice composition with which one may realize the importance of of the each day...a new day..not just another day..Beautiful idea..thanks
True..it's just a new day..but we human beings measure the span of life between birth and death within which we explore attempting at all sorts of things..interesting poem10
i like it reading...every now i then.... for it gives me a lesson that my heart always remember the new day that God gives...very beautiful indeed... for life to reflect the meaning of existence....thank you my friend and God bless you
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
I am pleased my poem had inspired you to write this. Great job. Linda