No more mosquito sucks or dog bites
Fear of the approaching leopard that tears the flesh
Or any threat of a dense forest or cathedral
Want to remain undisturbed, silent
In a new, happy world
Remain untouched by a rose or thorn
Immune from ecstasy or mourn
Don't wish any warnings, restrictions, bondage-
No anger, nor rage
Drank water was glared
Loved art but was censured
In hunger was bit, scratched, whipped
Extracted all labour, pittance
Tried to emulate, envying always
Looked forward
Making to look down dustbin disdainfully
And left to die as fern leaves.
Strong powerful lines pouring poetic frustrations...a good artful write...painting extremities of life...and still wanting to keep away from all of them...ten for you G...
Very powerful expression indeed. But I felt last three or four lines could have been made more explicit.......10
Life bristles with all this hazards and hardships.We cannot be just disdained this way with a mind reluctant to withstand this woe of the evil.They are not for long but they are always.We are thinking of them all the time and therefore it is hurting us.We have to confine ourselves in our own world where only we can explore solace.Hope you will get such an elixir for life.Thanks.Ray Amito...10..
Remain untouched by a rose or thorn Immune from ecstasy or mourn........... .. yet no riff or reeks by life across stream soul seems to be free from all by redemption............wonderful philosophy of life that leads to redemption of soul, and ultimate is the salvation, making no distinction happiness and sorrow, love and hate, etc,10++, thanks for sharing
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
'Making to look down dustbin disdainfully And left to die as fern leaves.' Nice, very nice poem. 10+