Waves, the words of those untiring seas
Writing an endless poetry in your beauty’s praise.
Stars, the night earth’s replacement for birds
In your blanket to match hues in your soporific eyes
Breeze, the partner for the moonlight at this hour
at ball dance which music conducts in your honor.
Lark and nightingales, the singers of lullabies for world
by your side to take notes of your sleepy blabberings.
Dews, perspiration of green grasses turning blue
due to shameful loss in matching your skins softness.
Myriads of flowers, those born of the copulation
between your breath and fragrance of your hair.
Bringing all these into life
and reflecting them in a tiny dropp of
tears of joy at the corner of my eye,
Your careless whispers in my ears.
Congratulations. A very nice poem with a great imagination. (While reading this poem one of my poems -My River - came to my mind. If you go thru that you can see some similarities in both the poems) . Good work, keep it up
You have embellished this beautiful love poem with embroidered words. Waves, breeze, stars, and dew all have a story to tell with gorgeous imagery. Simply beautiful! 10 Karin Anderson
I am so glad i read this poem Putyholi, it made me think, it changed my perspective regards Bob
Wonderful imagery, creating beautiful pictures in the mind.
see, thats why they say never judge a book by its cover, the same goes for the title of the poem, for you never know how beautiful nor brilliant the poem might be, nor the story a poem might tell.a very touching poem, and your partner is very lucky to have a man who expresses thier love for them in such beautiful poetry...
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
oh what a wondeffull imagination. the last para is especislly good.posted 10 for u surya