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A Part of Me

You are a part of me child
It’s undeniably true.
Look how you say certain words
And through silly things you do!

I'm in your mannerisms,
Little gestures and slight moves;
I'm in your choice of clothing,
Even in your taste of foods.

In many of your features
Everyone can plainly see,
A part of me in you child
And a part of you in me.

I'm so happy that you are,
I'm as proud as I can be,
All can see you're just as proud
That you are a part of me.

Submitted: Saturday, August 16, 2008
Edited: Saturday, August 16, 2008


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  • Rachel Ann love, love, love and life Butler (10/28/2009 9:00:00 AM)

    'A part of me in you child
    And a part of you in me'


    Rachel Ann Butler

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  • Bonnie Collins (1/18/2009 10:38:00 PM)

    How beautifull this is. IT trully brought tears to my eyes, as I am thinking of our grandson, the eldest Giovanni who has the misfortane of inherting my personality. This is such a tender write, very softly written with much pride and love...

    Bonnie

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  • Fay Slimm (11/28/2008 4:12:00 AM)

    A wonderfully warm tribute to your offspring Loyd and a fine example of family love....... best wishes from Fay.

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  • Reshma Ramesh (10/6/2008 9:12:00 AM)

    words flow like water smooth and perfect

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  • Ershad Mazumder (9/22/2008 10:52:00 PM)

    This is really good. Simple and sweet expression.10 marks for you dear taylor.

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  • Thad Wilk (8/16/2008 10:22:00 PM)

    A loving poem you've written here, this write could not be - more sincere! *10*!
    Best wishes Loyd! !
    Friend Thad

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