A Petalfly Poem by Elisa Lai

A Petalfly

Rating: 5.0


drifting down the noon beams
a golden petal
on reaching the cement
it came to life
and flew
away from me

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
John Tiong Chunghoo 24 April 2006

lovely, very japanese tanka

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Ernestine Northover 03 January 2006

A lovely poem Elisa, I've never seen one but you describe it beautifully, and in such a delicate way. Super! Love Ernestine XXX

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