Giving My Senses Away Poem by Elisa Lai

Giving My Senses Away

Rating: 4.5


leaning by you
I learnt to depend
to not trust my senses
because I’ve given them all to you
whatever you see I can feel it with my hands
whatever you smell I perceive it with all my senses
I choose to trust you, to depend on you
not because I can’t trust myself
nor because I have some kinds of inability
but because I trust myself
I trust my choice

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Ifedayo Oshin 02 May 2006

Hi Elisa, your poem teaches an important lesson that when we trust others, we trust ourselves ultimately, we trust our choice, so wea re not gullible. Keep it up, i like toread more form you

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John Tiong Chunghoo 24 April 2006

so that you can blame no others when things dont work out. it is the right attitude. you are in control.

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