A Poetic World Poem by Mehta Hasmukh Amathaal
A Poetic World
It is poetic world
Flow of nice words
No creation of upheaval
Words to look nice and real
It is for peace
Life to be at ease
New energy to release
All hostilities to cease
No storm to come and lash
No breach in shore and wash
It may be with message of danger
To come out of it without any anger
The world may be facing disasters
You may knell down before masters
Your feet may crumble
You got to be very humble
It is platform to spread message
Find the place in heart with good passage
The world to live in fantasy
No use of asking for any clemency
Better world with enough humor
Not to pierce through shield or armor
Rule the heart that needs solace
Will it be there in any palace?
• Interesting rhymes. But I'm not so sure poetry is nice words at all. This is one of big misnomers about writing poetry. Poetry is meant to enflame or move readers toward new concepts, physically, emotionally, & spiritually which means a poem needs internal conflict of some sort in its turning point, which is later conjoined in some way with the opening of the poem, when the closure on the poem is finally made. Stephen Crane's 'black rider' poems from the 1800's are haunting, scary, fearful and fearless. Yet they reveal much about people and various kinds of closed consciousness. (a knell) is a bell ringing for a death, a for whom the bell tolls kind of a thing. I think you mean 'kneel.' I misspell words all the time and I really appreciate it when someone brings it to my attention. I hope you are the same way. a poet friend/RH Peat on A poetic world From Ron Peat 21 J
No creation of upheaval Words to look nice and real.. it is different world...10
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It is poetic world Flow of nice words No creation of upheaval Words to look nice and real....it is different world....10