A Pregnant Pause Poem by PERSIAN NIGHTINGALE

A Pregnant Pause

Rating: 3.2


A silence
Pregnant with suspense
Peeping through your eyes
My mind
Pregnant with twins
My heart
Flushes with rosy splendor
A pregnant pause
Begins

(2008/12/4)

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Sandra Fowler 04 December 2008

Very original title and the content of your poem does not disappoint. You say little to say much.10 for you. Kind regards, Sandra

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Anjali Sinha 04 December 2008

wow! ! ! ! ! ! ! I have a pregnant smile remembering something just recollect -10 regards anjali (read mine TELEPATHY)

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Ramesh T A 04 December 2008

Indeed a pregnant pause is due to twins!

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Many thoughts and congratulations on the 'twins'.Another ten from me.

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Linda Winchell 04 December 2008

Congrats! God Bless and what a nice piece written for you children to one day read. Ten! Linda

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Rachel Butler 04 November 2009

'My heart Flushes with rosy splendor' Rachel Ann Butler

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Jihad T 17 January 2009

i guess i'm gonna close my eyes and add 10 to all your poem god bless you

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C. P. Sharma 13 December 2008

Nightingale, abort the twins and nourish the rosy splendor in heart, the child of bliss. Wow, an ecstacy of poetry! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! CP

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Vinod Kumar 06 December 2008

Writing in brief is very difficult, excellent narration Shukran

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Indira Babbellapati 06 December 2008

never heard a nightingale sing...but the song of the persian nightingale even while at pause.is soul stirring!

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