A Random Poem About My Day In The Life Of My Mind 1.1 (C) 1/26/09 Poem by Zahir Kijani

Beautiful writes from your mind...........an endless journey.

That poem is not bad at all

I like this its like a rapp song, or you could jump rope to it.LOL very good

i rlly loved this poem as well! ! ! u have a true and natural talent! ! ! very well written and thought out! ! i would have to agree with thomas i could c this as a rap song

I realy liked this poem as well -very good! ! !

I love the action in this poem! I love your poems because I can relate to them!

i lovee this lol. it's so rythmatic..

: D hehe gd one 10++ ur work so great n different

a very fun and odd poem, i liked it.

It is a poem with free verses. Simile is used very frequently : 'It's a cycle/Like a psycho' and 'useless/like a woodchuck toothless' '' shade lemur/Like a renegade femur''. in order to enhance the character of the person of the poem, that the author is willing to dig a little deeper, as a painting in which the face is not drawn, but only shadows appear. We see climax, here, like 'We'll fight y'know/til the knight go/and the fright blow'.The poem has an abstract meaning, like 'He's truthless/cause he ruthless/and useless/like a woodchuck toothless''.I like it.10+