A Shadowed Wedlock Poem by Indira Renganathan

A Shadowed Wedlock

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'Eclipse is nature's play..
Who can question God'

She said to continue

'Your's is not a play of
Eclipse but your secrecy

Why? am I so much avoidable?
Shadowed is your another life

More than this much of honesty
I don't know how to be

Who will help me to know
What you are?

Whoever said it...
I Condemn

Husband is not God
So too you aren't'

Tuesday, August 18, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kingsley Egbukole 11 November 2023

Beautiful poem. Thanks for sharing

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Dr Dillip K Swain 27 October 2023

In my opinion, if a husband is the God of a wife, then the wife is a goddess.. Equal respect, equal contribution and equal sharing must be there!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 27 October 2023

A wonderful poem. However, Indian women normally worship their husbands like Gods. But I wonder why don't they consider their wives as goddesses?

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Kumarmani Mahakul 20 August 2020

Eclipse is nature's play.. Who can question God' ******. *******. Husband is not God So too you aren't'....these beginning lines and concluding lines says much about God and husband. Dear madam you have so wisely delineated this poem. I appreciate it. Thanks a lot.10

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Varsha M 18 August 2020

Yes husband is not God but a respectable person worthy to be admired for they maintain the essence.

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