A Stranger Poem by Jessica Elizondo

A Stranger

Rating: 3.9


How cold. How it makes me shiver during the night. How black. How its turning me inside out. The shadows in the corener. How they mock me. They laugh and endure the pain. My pain! It's a sickness, and I'm sick of it! No! This isn't me! this is a stranger in my body. A stranger controlled by satan. No more! No more negativity! No more depressing attiude! .......God help me! Please! I cry out to you father....please!

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silver phoenix 01 August 2008

Fears, they feed upon your happiness...dont let anyone tell you what to write, write how you feel, you have passion. If you have time please check some of my work, Thank you, Kilian

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, aryaindia 20 July 2008

I reallh feel that at your age, you should be writing happy poems that spell hope and well being both within and without. Try to be positive and do not give into the insecure feelings you may feel within you. Goodbye to everything that is over. You are Born Again for sure............pls read my poem born again and you shall know. P.S.: Your name is very very long isn't it?

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Kyle Shield Laster 25 June 2008

what is it? ? I HAFTA KNOW! ! ! lol.

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