Deb Panda

Rookie - 386 Points (1992 / KEONJHAR, ODISHA, INDIA)

A Summer Afternoon Rain - Poem by Deb Panda

Oh’ Muse!
High from the highest ranges!
Your smile hails with respite-
Stealing this fervent memories weary band-
My empty pots brimming with cold drops-
For your grace, upon this arid land!

And my geography turns away from the world-
To fill those starry eyed halts, dots
With glimpses of your blissful creation-
I behold, rest –a strife torn pilgrim
Away from the despair, worldly lies-Shun!

I rise, to this thunderous welcome!
That shut the doors with truth,
With your benign words, to be blessed
Upon this summer rain to beat the dust-
Of all my worldly stature, freest soul with your touch!

Poet's Notes about The Poem

To-...5.. read this when there is any rain, storm, power cut...
This was written expressing my gratitude at the welcome, of this summer rain, hailstorm... On way, I was stuck! I felt I should be there....the poem reflects the rest....

Comments about A Summer Afternoon Rain by Deb Panda

  • Gold Star - 21,770 Points * Sunprincess * (8/19/2015 10:18:00 PM) the theme, very nice ★ (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 22,472 Points Kim Barney (3/16/2015 3:53:00 PM)

    Not many things are more pleasant or welcome than a summer rain.
    Very nice. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 122 Points Yash Shinde (4/5/2014 11:47:00 AM)

    .........rain is grace from god..lovely beautiful piece, penned with emotions...........wonderful write (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 8,652 Points Hazel Durham (4/4/2014 4:41:00 PM)

    Drenched in the truth of the summer rain cleansing and freeing yourself in it's downpour of hope!
    Beautiful write! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 5,236 Points Patricia Grantham (4/4/2014 6:51:00 AM)

    Very nice poem. The rains moistens the dry parched earth.
    Your muse has no disappointed you. Oh! Muse. Good (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 27,492 Points Edward Kofi Louis (4/4/2014 3:45:00 AM)

    A very nice piece of work. Keep it up; and, thanks for sharing your poem with us.

    E.K.L. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Friday, April 4, 2014

Poem Edited: Friday, April 4, 2014

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