A thought descended over, Her;
Lustrous Eyes; brimmed with dreams,
To ascent over Her Childish Smile-
Unknown! Fear - prejudice of his cycle.
Mystery! Ungainly pain bloomed on Her-
Lips murmuring the song of victory;
Over prudence of the will; stately sin,
From raucous hurry, lands of her kin.
Gleam; does not bear those Eyes,
Mine- sedate in her penchant smile;
From scripts bygone; carnage in lost-
In granaries of Hope- dates of past.
Brilliant! A song in beats weaved-
Out of her waving lips-colours;
Of stately Music, in heart encumbered,
With agony, mortal men have feared.
Pure; Reverberates the chaste Epics,
Hailed high; song hails from heaven-
Upon the stretches of pain; delta-plane;
The beauty of her pledge settled in.
Smile; swears this lagged soul-
To alleviate from wills of thought,
Down the Autumn evening behind;
The wearied sun; sublime dancing Wind!
very good write..the notes improved the beauty of the poem...very good write, »so close«
a good thought for the day through a grt poem....keep going on.........grt...
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I would like to translate this poem
I didn't understand this poem but your notes makes it clear, a beautiful message of how a smile can lighten your day with feelings of joy and thankfulness for such a simple gesture! Thanks for sharing!