Francesca Johnson

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A Temporary Man - Poem by Francesca Johnson

A temporary man
can
be a good distraction
when filled with action
of the physical sort,
a real sporty sport.
Any port in a storm,
so they say.

But

a permanent man
can
be a true mate,
her best friend
who's willing to lend
a helping hand
day or night,
do what's right,
hold her tight
and just love her,
and love her,
and love her.........forever.


Comments about A Temporary Man by Francesca Johnson

  • Rookie - 0 Points Sid John Gardner. (7/9/2013 3:40:00 PM)

    Most of my women friends have this dream, that they will meet the.perfect' man. When you find him tell me who and where he is as I need a pair of old walking boots mending... (Report) Reply

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  • Rookie - 0 Points Sid John Gardner. (3/14/2009 2:45:00 AM)

    No more than a distraction.Many a true word. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Reshma Ramesh (2/8/2009 1:19:00 AM)

    hmmm...........permanence has its own advantages............well penned (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Amy (9/22/2008 4:20:00 PM)

    this is really expressed well- congrats- (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ershad Mazumder (9/12/2008 11:38:00 AM)

    This life is temporal. So do not look for a permanent partner. Very good expression. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,323 Points James B. Earley (4/29/2008 11:24:00 AM)

    The observation here suggests the temporary man is endowed with certain attributes considered favorable. I see no evident plan of elimination. My question is.....could there possibly be more here than you're sharing? ? ? ? Whatever.....it's a 10....... Thanks... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Sylvi Sylva (1/7/2008 4:17:00 PM)

    very true, i think the temp is more like (if I may invite you to read my Eye Candy) topten I say (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ivor Hogg (1/5/2008 4:00:00 PM)

    How very true Francesca but also applies t the fair sex, If one is extremely lucky one finds a true soul mate in fact ones other half as it were. ivor (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Raymond Wright (12/24/2007 7:01:00 AM)

    From your lips to God's ears! Another beauty!
    ~Ray (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,862 Points David Harris (11/13/2007 4:02:00 PM)

    Fran, I liked this as it left me pondering for an appropriate comment to make. Grand poem as usual. Top marks and thanks for sharing it my friend.
    David (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Duncan Wyllie (11/9/2007 1:03:00 PM)

    This is written with a flare of sensitivity and kindness, I really enjoyed reading it
    Thankyou Fran
    Take care
    Love duncan X (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Lynda Robson (11/7/2007 5:08:00 AM)

    Trouble is Fran, when we start off we don't know if temporary man is going to become permanant man, then we can get hurt, as usual an excellent piece which gets one thinking, love Lynda xx (Report) Reply

  • Rookie R H (11/6/2007 8:22:00 AM)

    Superb contrasts here Fran, wisely and eloquently penned... j x (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Original Unknown Girl (11/6/2007 8:03:00 AM)

    Hmmm... what to say? Well, a temporary man can be changed and exchanged and when done with we can send him off if he's deranged! (Sorry I couldn't resist that!) Though a permanent man, if he's the one and understands, will certainly give you all the love you demand.....and demand..... and demand! ! Yeah, I think the latter would be preferable all right, though the former can be lots of fun! ! Erm.... shall I get out of your inbox now? HG: -) xx (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Tara very irritated with PH injustice (11/6/2007 1:59:00 AM)

    Yes. Eloquently and succinctly stated. We know which we prefer, yes......? t x (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Alison Cassidy (11/5/2007 7:19:00 PM)

    Talk about faint praise (I am referring to the comment under me - sorry I couldn't resist) . This is brilliant! Great theme, impeccably presented. A thoroughly enchanting piece. love, Allie xxxx (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Ethan Cox (11/5/2007 1:39:00 PM)

    wow thats pretty good, care to take a look at my poems? (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, November 5, 2007

Poem Edited: Friday, April 22, 2011


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