Rajesh Thankappan

Gold Star - 4,884 Points (Guwahati)

A Thought On Thoughts - Poem by Rajesh Thankappan

Our thought can be our friend
Or an inimical serpent,
It can be the light
Or the darkness that blinds,
It can make us stray
Into uncharted ways
Balloon us up with joy
Or break us down like a clay toy.


A good way to control this chap
Is by simply watching unobtrusive his track.
But be careful not to tread on his toes,
So better follow him softly on tiptoes.


Comments about A Thought On Thoughts by Rajesh Thankappan

  • Gold Star - 5,975 Points Hazel Durham (4/20/2015 5:47:00 AM)

    Thoughts can be delightful or our worst enemy, a insightful and beautiful write! (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 37,749 Points Mehta Hasmukh Amathalal (3/15/2014 7:52:00 PM)

    Balloon us up with joy... nice one on human psychology...10

    go with
    and be armed with teeth
    control on thought is must
    with self confidence and trust (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,726 Points Dinesh Nair (3/15/2014 6:56:00 AM)

    Balloon is deceptive though it often takes up. The clay toy is more honest yet. We are helpless.
    A fine poem from you sir. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 22,181 Points Valsa George (3/13/2014 11:34:00 PM)

    A very interesting thought..! It is our thoughts that control our actions and actions determine our fate

    Our thoughts can 'Balloon us up with joy
    Or break us down like a clay toy.'............... Quite true! ! So let us follow our thoughts softly on tiptoes! !

    ! (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,367 Points Mr. Nobody (3/13/2014 10:38:00 PM)

    Very nice!

    I love to wave at thought as it passes by! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, March 13, 2014

Poem Edited: Friday, March 14, 2014


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