Samanyan Lakshminarayanan


A Total Aspect - Poem by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

to be present in the present...
is just not a physical aspect
to be present in the present
is just not even a mental aspect
to be present in the present
is neither all an emotional aspect
it is also a spiritual aspect too
to be present in the present
is a total aspect


Comments about A Total Aspect by Samanyan Lakshminarayanan

  • Rookie - 26 Points Fiona Davidson (3/8/2009 1:14:00 AM)

    Deep words and an excellent read......thank you.........10+ (Report) Reply

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  • Silver Star - 4,249 Points Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar (3/7/2009 8:23:00 AM)

    I am deeply moved by this piece. shan (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 14 Points Ravi Sathasivam (3/1/2009 7:20:00 AM)

    Very simple and well written.
    Nice poem (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 19 Points Rajaram Ramachandran (3/1/2009 6:35:00 AM)

    It is true that the total aspect is taken into account to be present in the present. In a few words, you have brought out this total aspect. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 12 Points Fay Slimm (2/27/2009 7:19:00 PM)

    Good concise summary of what it means to be really present - I like this one and a 10 from Fay (Report) Reply

  • Freshman - 643 Points Ramesh T A (2/26/2009 2:38:00 PM)

    To be present in the present in the real sense is well revealed in this piece. Nice! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Krista Churchill (2/26/2009 12:08:00 AM)

    Nice nice work great poem nice words also..

    Krista (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Jack Prost (2/24/2009 8:10:00 PM)

    Mind, body and spirit are separated only by our need to use language to describe them. True presence includes all that is human. A perfect description of one in being. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 111 Points C. P. Sharma (2/24/2009 8:16:00 AM)

    Profound thought. To be present in the present is to array surroundings, mind and soul in One line.
    CP (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Catrina Heart (2/24/2009 8:14:00 AM)

    A poem written with some depth...one's personality must be totally whole and healthy in all aspects to became worthy and live a meaningful life.......10 (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 112 Points Sathyanarayana M V S (2/24/2009 7:13:00 AM)

    Deep, thought provoking philosophy! I have to cogitate more on this one...............>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>> (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Vaibhav Pandey (2/24/2009 5:27:00 AM)

    Great thoughts in this one.....Very interesting to read...good job Sam (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, February 23, 2009