A Trip Poem by SALINI NAIR

A Trip

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Started a voyage in glee
Land merges its heart to thee
The passage was humid and icy
Sometimes deserted and scorch

Then there saw a deep sea in front
Confront to its surge and depth
There the salty water sniffs for a while
The coldness shivers the poise of life

Next passage was in air
There the heights smother the breath
But the inspired pursue the voyage
Destination was its vision

Life is like a journey this way
Pits and falls are part of a voyage
All the twist takes to a summit
There uncertainty is a conquest always! ! ! !

©2014 SALINI.S.NAIR. All rights reserved.

Thursday, August 21, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aftab Alam Khursheed 22 August 2014

paradoxical trip to show the reality...what is the life? question of many soul..ups and down and again ups or down, Concluding stanza is the soul of the poem and the respected poetess has given the best to understand a lovely poem Salini thank you

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Geetha Jayakumar 21 August 2014

A Beautiful trip of life with twist and turn, ways uncertain, pits and falls in voyage, but it take us to our destination but with uncertainty is a conquest always.... I loved reading the beautiful trip we have to follow, thought some what different roads, but the destination is same. Loved the way you presented it.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 21 August 2014

Pilgrimage of life so beautifully narrated with nice words and phrases.............thanks for sharing

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Khalida Bano Ali 21 August 2014

The journey of life is beautifully described.

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Akhtar Jawad 21 August 2014

The Life is like a journey this way Pits and falls are part of a voyage All the twist takes to a summit There uncertainty is a conquest always! ! ! journey of life so beautifully painted,

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