A Weekend Of Full Moons Poem by James McLain

James McLain

James McLain

From Tampa Florida And Still Living Near By

A Weekend Of Full Moons

Rating: 5.0


She stood there under the moon,
It is day.
Up on the hill where I live above the
Clouds it is dark.

God watching you, you watching God,
Beating heart's all have stopped.
You are the same, hearing your voice,
Voice's that never change.

Tears hide the face, year's exposed and
You looked the same today.

It's about the sea I suppose, you caught
Up in the waves, those very same waves,
Under the moon in the dark, I was safe

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Bri Edwards 16 September 2022

James, my 'old' friend, you have 'wasted' some apostrophes, using them where they do not belong in some plases in your poem. oops. : ) bri

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Bri Edwards 16 September 2022

God Iwhich I don't believe in) could perhaps look at each other witihout negative consequences, BUT to have a conversation with Her/Him would probably not go well.

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