A Woman's Cold Night Poem by Lupee Awe

A Woman's Cold Night

Rating: 4.0


It was just yesterday you left
It seems like a thousand years
in this cold you left me
You want me to bear it all alone

You said you wont be travelling alone
That there will be company
Your CEO secretary and many more
Here i am sitting am all alone

You are laughing there is a party
Champagne on your lips, kisses on your chicks
Business party business kiss business hug business sex
My bed is empty, i am all alone

You come back to me with these words
Honey i miss you sooo much
A fairytale lie you try to actualize
But what can i say, i miss you too

Friday, April 22, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: life
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Dr Antony Theodore 22 April 2016

You are laughing there is a party Champagne on your lips, kisses on your chicks Business party business kiss business hug business sex My bed is empty, i am all alone........... you come with a fairy tale lie........... i miss u... facts of daily life in the business world..... faithfulness in married life is something very much sacred.......... God-given gift......... you have powerfully presented the message. tony

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Lupee Awe 23 April 2016

Thank you sir POET

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 22 April 2016

A high degree of separation reflects in the composition, and you have presented the pain, expectations and conjugal discord beautifully. Thank you poet for sharing it. You deserve 10 for it. I invite you to comment on some of my poems too. Thanks. Subhas

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Lupee Awe 23 April 2016

Thank you for encouragement i surely will sir POET!

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Anil Kumar Panda 22 April 2016

This is really sad. When husbands play tricks with other halves. Very nice spilling of emotion. Like the way you put it. Keep inking Lupee.

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Lupee Awe 23 April 2016

Thank you sooo much i appreciate i will do my best and thanks again

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