Marcus McKinley

Rookie - 171 Points (EARTH)

A Work In Progress.... - Poem by Marcus McKinley

I have yet to write my greatest work
Pondering and postulating, in words diverse
Each poem ‘till then a mere rehearse
Toward the work of greatest verse

Honing my skills, I whittle and whittle
Each word cutting precise emotion
Cunning and comfy the context at battle
Yet narrow minded in its devotion

Confound and compound, lingual in texture
Twisting and turning, cerebral in gist
Latitudinal waving, shaking the structure
Laughing, crying, pounding fist

A secret meaning unread is missed
For in the text a message exists

And that!

Is the greatest poem ever written


Comments about A Work In Progress.... by Marcus McKinley

  • Freshman - 961 Points Adeline Foster (2/6/2013 3:13:00 PM)

    Really? Oh I get it. 'It is in progress.' Ok, Ok, i'll buy it.Read mine - Cicatrix -
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  • Rookie - -1 Points Cosmic Dreamer (10/31/2011 10:33:00 AM)

    We are all our own worst critics... Very nice poem, made me smile... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Jacqui Broad (10/30/2011 4:06:00 PM)

    I understand your frustration...very good poem! (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, October 30, 2011

Poem Edited: Sunday, October 30, 2011


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