Treasure Island

Marcus McKinley

(EARTH)

More Than Love


Lead me there
To your favorite chair
Sit me down
Fingers through hair
Passion stare
Rip shirt
Flesh bare
I prepare
To be seduced

To and fro
Swing free
YES! ! !
Let them hang down on me
Soft supple blossoms
Caress my chest
Lay them to rest
Upon me

When dressed
Their view is best
Above, from the neck
To the naval
I am starting to unravel

Sultry skin
Smooth as sin
These legs languorous
In stiletto
Calf tense
Tracing every curve
With verve
Gently I touch
As you place your leg on my shoulder

Enticing me in, for a kiss
Then resist, teasing my senses
Compounding this immeasurable bliss
A visual mind blitz of pleasure
This moment..., I treasure

Blossoms caress
Face to chest
Tongue from neck to naval
In my mind I implore
I can't take no more
I lay on the floor unraveled,
like spaghetti
with no utensil
You consume me

Before the words reached my lips
I want you! more than love
You bring me to pure ecstasy

Submitted: Wednesday, August 08, 2012
Edited: Thursday, August 09, 2012

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  • Bella Hernandez (8/18/2012 5:39:00 PM)

    So Passionate! ! ! ! i wouldnt even dare to write such poetry! !
    you made me so speachless! such vivid images that go through my mind! ! ! splendid truely amazingly splendid! ! !
    ~Bella (Report) Reply

  • Kelly Seale (8/17/2012 11:11:00 PM)

    Very passionate read Marcus. You are a man much like me... where your words make love to the soul... Graet Ink! ! ! ; -)
    -Kelly. (Report) Reply

  • Marieta Maglas (8/17/2012 7:43:00 AM)

    ''As you place your leg on my shoulder''-I understand your poetic style-enjoyed reading this poetic language of the bodies..... (Report) Reply

  • Pranab K Chakraborty (8/14/2012 12:31:00 AM)

    Seduction should be fulfilled immediately by choice or by hiring. It is far better than composing pain at least by words.....It's my primary reaction. Next I think, poet has not written such bogus erotic, it has certainely different aspect which I can't communicate...... (Report) Reply

  • Bernard Snyder (8/13/2012 9:54:00 PM)

    Well damn' Marcus! ! (just kiddin') Very nice 'write'. The flow was exactly that.....flow-producing! ! Keep doing your thing man! (Report) Reply

  • Kasia Fedyk (8/13/2012 2:32:00 PM)

    Soul love making when body becomes only a tool of pure expression, incredible poem Marcus! (Report) Reply

  • Urshula Davis (8/12/2012 9:29:00 PM)

    Ok! ! ! Dope flow and this kept me wanting more to read! Love it! ! And yes very erotic! ! (Report) Reply

  • Kaila George (8/12/2012 9:24:00 PM)

    That is a brillant write on a true expression of wants and needs and love between a man and a women loved it....sure ph wont delet it....shakes be fools if they do (Report) Reply

  • Adam Mckim (8/12/2012 9:05:00 PM)

    Very erotic from beginning to end. Not really sure what else to say lol. But very good. (Report) Reply

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