Marcus McKinley

Rookie - 170 Points (EARTH)

More Than Love - Poem by Marcus McKinley

Lead me there
To your favorite chair
Sit me down
Fingers through hair
Passion stare
Rip shirt
Flesh bare
I prepare
To be seduced

To and fro
Swing free
YES! ! !
Let them hang down on me
Soft supple blossoms
Caress my chest
Lay them to rest
Upon me

When dressed
Their view is best
Above, from the neck
To the naval
I am starting to unravel

Sultry skin
Smooth as sin
These legs languorous
In stiletto
Calf tense
Tracing every curve
With verve
Gently I touch
As you place your leg on my shoulder

Enticing me in, for a kiss
Then resist, teasing my senses
Compounding this immeasurable bliss
A visual mind blitz of pleasure
This moment..., I treasure

Blossoms caress
Face to chest
Tongue from neck to naval
In my mind I implore
I can't take no more
I lay on the floor unraveled,
like spaghetti
with no utensil
You consume me

Before the words reached my lips
I want you! more than love
You bring me to pure ecstasy


Comments about More Than Love by Marcus McKinley

  • Gold Star - 32,508 Points Chinedu Dike (10/7/2014 6:46:00 PM)

    A lovely poem, well articulated and nicely penned. How you managed to convey the erotic message without sounding outwardly obscene is a wonder. I salute your talent. Thanks for sharing. Please read my poem MANDELA - THE IMMORTAL ICON. (Report) Reply

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  • Gold Star - 10,063 Points Heather Wilkins (7/1/2013 8:07:00 PM)

    a beautiful romantic poem. (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 182 Points Karen Sinclair (8/23/2012 4:48:00 PM)

    A highly passionate piece, lovely (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Bella Hernandez (8/18/2012 5:39:00 PM)

    So Passionate! ! ! ! i wouldnt even dare to write such poetry! !
    you made me so speachless! such vivid images that go through my mind! ! ! splendid truely amazingly splendid! ! !
    ~Bella (Report) Reply

  • Rookie Kelly Seale (8/17/2012 11:11:00 PM)

    Very passionate read Marcus. You are a man much like me... where your words make love to the soul... Graet Ink! ! ! ; -)
    -Kelly. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,563 Points Marieta Maglas (8/17/2012 7:43:00 AM)

    ''As you place your leg on my shoulder''-I understand your poetic style-enjoyed reading this poetic language of the bodies..... (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 3 Points Claudia Krizay (8/14/2012 3:44:00 PM)

    moving and very honest- good work! ! (Report) Reply

  • Silver Star - 4,293 Points Pranab K Chakraborty (8/14/2012 12:31:00 AM)

    Seduction should be fulfilled immediately by choice or by hiring. It is far better than composing pain at least by words.....It's my primary reaction. Next I think, poet has not written such bogus erotic, it has certainely different aspect which I can't communicate...... (Report) Reply

  • Bronze Star - 2,293 Points Bernard Snyder (8/13/2012 9:54:00 PM)

    Well damn' Marcus! ! (just kiddin') Very nice 'write'. The flow was exactly that.....flow-producing! ! Keep doing your thing man! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 0 Points Kasia Fedyk (8/13/2012 2:32:00 PM)

    Soul love making when body becomes only a tool of pure expression, incredible poem Marcus! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 67 Points Urshula Davis (8/12/2012 9:29:00 PM)

    Ok! ! ! Dope flow and this kept me wanting more to read! Love it! ! And yes very erotic! ! (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 740 Points Kaila George (8/12/2012 9:24:00 PM)

    That is a brillant write on a true expression of wants and needs and love between a man and a women loved it....sure ph wont delet it....shakes be fools if they do (Report) Reply

  • Rookie - 222 Points Adam Mckim (8/12/2012 9:05:00 PM)

    Very erotic from beginning to end. Not really sure what else to say lol. But very good. (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Wednesday, August 8, 2012

Poem Edited: Thursday, August 9, 2012


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