Bri Edwards

Gold Star - 6,967 Points (some time ago / Earth, i believe)

Acting 5 Years Old....... [Marriage/Relationship; Discord; VERY Very Short; Humor? ] Poem by Bri Edwards


My wife said “Write about why you act like 5 years OLD.”
It’s hard to believe, I know, but that’s what she TOLD....
...me!
So I’ll tell YOU why I interrupt her, yell, disobey, and even MORE:
It’s BECAUSE my dear sweet loving wife sometimes acts like FOUR!

Submitted: Friday, May 17, 2013
Edited: Saturday, May 18, 2013

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the first line is TRUE. the rest of the poem is partially true. i have NOT shown my wife the poem...yet.

Comments about this poem (Acting 5 Years Old....... [Marriage/Relationship; Discord; VERY Very Short; Humor? ] by Bri Edwards )

  • Gold Star - 15,246 Points John Westlake (11/7/2014 6:49:00 PM)

    Oh dear. This can happen at times and can be most amusing. If you had been born on a planet further way from the sun than earth, your wife could be four anyway. This would depend on the planet and her age of course. (Report) Reply

  • Gold Star - 9,741 Points Heather Wilkins (6/24/2013 6:21:00 AM)

    ha ha this happens so often. (Report) Reply

  • Veteran Poet - 1,063 Points Kanav Justa (5/18/2013 12:43:00 AM)

    hahaha, , , , i wonder how old is your son, , , (Report) Reply

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